A Well Written Police Report
by Michael B. Druxman on 04/18/11
April 19, 2011
First, here is the link to the short trailer I made up for my one-woman play, LOMBARD. If it doesn't work, then just copy/paste the following into your browser and you get right there.
http://www.youtube.com/user/druxy1#p/u/0/tA1Zkyk-ZqM
I thought I did a particularly good job on this one.
BTW: The script will not be available on Amazon for another week or so, but you can get it now at CreateSpace. I posted that link in yesterday's blog.
Now, here's something I was sent:
A well written police report
POLICE REPORT - Augusta, GA
Orville Smith, a store manager for Best Buy in Augusta, Georgia, told police he observed a male customer, later identified as Tyrone Jackson of Augusta, on surveillance cameras putting a laptop computer under his jacket. When confronted the man became irate, knocked down an employee, drew a knife and ran for the door.
Outside on the sidewalk were four Marines collecting toys for the "Toys for Tots" program. Smith said the Marines stopped the man, but he stabbed one of the Marines, Cpl. Phillip Duggan, in the back; the injury did not appear to be severe.
After Police and an ambulance arrived at the scene, Cpl. Duggan was transported for treatment.
The subject was also transported to the local hospital with two broken arms, a broken ankle, a broken leg, several missing teeth, possible broken ribs, multiple contusions, assorted lacerations, a broken nose and a broken jaw...injuries he sustained when he slipped and fell off of the curb after stabbing the Marine.
Now that was a well written Police report.
You have a creative day.
Michael
